Apr 15 2009
Pink Floyd Sentence Combining
Combine each grouping of sentences into one sentence using all of the sentence combining tricks at your disposal.
1. The sky is reddened by a typical Midwestern sunset.
2. The sky begins clouding over just before dusk.
3. But no threat of rain can stop something.
The sky is reddened by a Midwestern sunset, and begins clouding before dusk no treat of rain can stop.
4. Twenty thousand rock fans flock to Cincinnati’s River-front Coliseum.
5. They are coming to see and hear Pink Floyd.
Twenty thousand pink floyd rock fans, flock to cincinattis coliseum.
6. The concert is still three hours off.
7. The concert has already attracted early birds.
8. There are several thousand of them.
9. They are all decked out.
10. They are wearing their best rock-concert, faded blue jeans.
11. They are wearing their best rock-concert, tie-dyed T-shirts.
12. They are all keyed up for the high-energy Pink Floyd show.
The concert is three hours off, attracted early birds, all decked out in rocker gear, wearing faded bluc jeans, tye dyed shirts, and all keyed up for high energy pink floyd show.
13. There are newcomers to the rock scene.
14. Their newness is obvious.
15. They wander about.
The new comers at the rock scene are obvious, they wander about.
16. They gawk at the others.
17. They are conspicuous.
18. They wear neatly pressed checked slacks.
19. They wear expensive shirts.
They gawk at others conspicuously, wearing neatly pressed checked slacks and expensive shirts.
20. There are loners.
21. Their eyes are barely open.
22. Their arms dangle uselessly at their sides.
23. They weave aimlessly around the circles.
24. The squinting is so they can steady themselves.
There are loners,eyes barley open, arms dangle uselessly at their sides, weaving aimlessly around squinting to steady themselves.
25. There are couples.
26. They cling to each other.
27. They are near fountains or in remote corners.
Couples cling together near fountains in remote corners.
28. There are real police.
29. They are not the rent-a-cop breed.
30. They stride confidently.
31. They stride in large groups.
32. They stride among the crowd.
33. They twirl their billyclubs.
34. They sweep their eyes over the area,
35. They look for trouble.
Police not rent a cop brees stride confidenly, in large groups among the crowd twirling billyclubs sweeping over the area looking for trouble.
36. Hawkers call out.
37. They call wherever there are crowds.
38. They try to unload cheap T-shirts.
39. They try to unload pennants.
40. They draw only laughter from most concert goers.
Hawkers call out in the crowds,trying to unload cheap t shirts and pennants but only draw laughter from concert goers.
41. The numbers grow.
42. There are circles of roamers, couples, and cops.
43. Roamers swarm confusedly over the acres of concrete.
44. Couples swarm confusedly over the acres of concrete.
45. Cops swarm confusedly over the acres of concrete.
46. The acres of concrete that lead up to the auditorium.
Numbers grow, circles of roamers, couples, and cops swarm confusedly over acres of concrete that lead up to the auditiorium.
47. The management realizes something.
48. The hordes can no longer be contained peacefully.
49. Then, the doors open.
50. Waves of fans pour into the coliseum.
51. They are already tired from waiting.
Management realized the hordes no longer contained peacefully, doors open, waves of fans pour into the coliseum tired of waiting.
52. They are already sweaty from waiting.
53. They are just in time for something.
54. They wait out the final hour before the show.
Already sweating from waiting for something, and wait out the final hour before the show.
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